I'm just an animal looking for a home

Bad First Line


Too conventional
It definitely needs more

Comments: I had tried to begin a haiku with “Sleep is a specter” and I quickly became disgusted with that choice of a first line.


Author: mitcharf

vegan, curmudgeon, animal lover, feminist, agnostic, cat whisperer, bookworm, hermit, Red Sox fan, Cthulhu enthusiast, softball player, man-about-town

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