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Unit 33


Unit 33 Haiku

Robotic dancing
Endless electronic sound
Motherfuckin’ beat

Comments: This is my haiku tribute to an opening band I saw recently. The band was Unit 33, opening for Critters Buggin. I think my haiku pretty much sums them up.

Unit 33 Haiku Rebuttal
by Greg Sharek
Suck suck suck suck suck
Suck suck suck suck suck suck suck
The silence of rain.

Comments: This is Greg’s haiku about Unit 33, written in response to the previous haiku.


Author: mitcharf

vegan, curmudgeon, animal lover, feminist, agnostic, cat whisperer, bookworm, hermit, Red Sox fan, Cthulhu enthusiast, softball player, man-about-town

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